Dear Jane (Week 3)

Dear Jane,

I feel really sad reading your story because it’s clear no one ever truly listened to you. Being trapped in that room and told your feelings didn’t matter must have been terrifying and lonely. As a highschool girl, it made me angry to see how your husband and the others acted like they knew better than you about your own mind.You didn’t deserve to be ignored or controlled, and your story helped me understand why speaking up for yourself is so important.

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